Atanvarno
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After watching the episode three script discussion and listening to the script outlines podcast, episode three really clicked for me, so I had an attempt writing it.
After some notes and encouragement from Nick Palazzo (thanks again, Nick!), it's in a ready-enough state to post publicly.
Some notes:
I've attached the pdf, as well as the Fountain source. Scene numbers are included to make commenting easier.
(A final aside on runtime – it's nowhere near the full hour that is aimed for. This a known issue, but there's really not much that can be done about it. The story is the length it is.)
EDIT:
Google Docs link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/...wkuYMZjzhTzZz9LDs6euPXU/edit?usp=docslist_api
Sadly, Google Docs isn't ideal for screenplay formatting, so use this tool in conjunction with that link.
(I use Fountain Editor to write with if anyone is looking for a lightweight free tool.)
After some notes and encouragement from Nick Palazzo (thanks again, Nick!), it's in a ready-enough state to post publicly.
Some notes:
- The start and and ending sections of the frame are not done. I would really like someone with more affinity for the frame to draft those (or at least give me a fuller outline with some firm direction).
- As mentioned in the in-script notes, the scene that interfaces with Ainulindalë is a place holder, until the episode 1 script gets there. Until then, I don't know what material I'm picking up and what is already used. Nick is working on this.
- I have, in places, diverged from the outline.
I've attached the pdf, as well as the Fountain source. Scene numbers are included to make commenting easier.
(A final aside on runtime – it's nowhere near the full hour that is aimed for. This a known issue, but there's really not much that can be done about it. The story is the length it is.)
EDIT:
Google Docs link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/...wkuYMZjzhTzZz9LDs6euPXU/edit?usp=docslist_api
Sadly, Google Docs isn't ideal for screenplay formatting, so use this tool in conjunction with that link.
(I use Fountain Editor to write with if anyone is looking for a lightweight free tool.)
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