Here is my script for Episode 8. Please let me know what you think and if you have suggestions for improvements.
The characters with their names in brackets are the ones that I would like names for. I don't think any of them are big enough roles to include on the cast list; I just thought it would make more sense in the script if the other characters called them by real names when speaking to or about them.
[Prospector 1] is captured with Diriel, and she saves him from the Spell of Bottomless Dread.
[Noldo Prisoner 1] is a prisoner who introduces himself to Diriel and helps with the escape plan but dies at the end of the episode.
[Dead Body 1], [Dead Body 2], and [Dead Body 3] are just bodies that Celebrimbor finds. I wanted him to refer to them by names to remind the viewers that they were people he knew.
If what Maedhros says in his attempt to convince Celebrimbor and Orodreth not to go to Angband is too silly, I can take it out. I just couldn't resist the chance for him to make that joke.
I only read the outline of the episode where Celebrimbor breaks into the Silmaril vault, so let me know if that flashback should go differently.
I tried to combine several people's ideas for the depiction of the Spell of Bottomless Dread and focus on what Edhellos sees when it is placed on her.