Sailing, Sailing, Sailing

Ruth Furukawa

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I arranged everything Sam said in his first conversation as a free-verse poem



But what about these tree men

These giants, as you might call them?

They do say that one bigger

Than a tree was seen up away

Beyond the north moors

Not long back


My cousin Hal saw one.

He works for Mr. Boffin

At Overhill and goes

Up to the Northfarthing for the hunting.

He saw one.


And this one was as big

As an elm tree, and walking---

Walking seven yards to a stride,

If it was was an inch.


All the same, you can't deny

That others besides our Halfast

Have seen queer folk

Crossing the Shire--- Crossing it, mind you:

There are more that are turned back at the borders

The bounders have never

Been so busy before


And I've heard tell

That elves are moving west.

They say they are going to the harbors

Out away beyond the White Towers

They are sailing, sailing, sailing

Over the Sea.

They are going into the West

And leaving us.


Well I don't know.

There's some, even in these parts,

As know the Fair Folk and get news of them

There's Mr. Baggins now, that I work for

He told me they were sailing

And he knows a bit about Elves.

And old Mr. Bilbo knew more:

Many's the talk I had with him

When I was a little lad.




It works surprisingly well, I think.
 
Haha that's next level. I've just started doing it with Tom Bombadil, but that's child's play; it's almost easier to read that as poetry.
 
This is wild! It DOES work surprisingly well, and most of it actually falls into "hobbit meter" (iambic tetrameter). !!!
 
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