Thank you so much for the feedback! If you don't already know, the next session will be this Thursday (Nov. 14), and we will be discussing Episodes 8 and 9. The most important thing you need to know if you are not caught up is that Angrod is a very important character and should not be killed off in the Dagor Aglareb.
A. The style of dialogue has been discussed at various points, but nothing was officially decided on. When I began writing the scripts, I decided to go wit the "thees" and "thous" for two main reasons. First, I wanted to be able to lift dialogue directly from both the published Silmarillion and Tolkien's older writings without modernizing it. Second, since this project will cover thousands of years of history, we can show how the language develops over time.
B. When writing the scripts, I have tried to keep in mind that there won't be any actual shooting done based on them, so I have tried to avoid making them choppy by breaking them into lots of individual shots. That said, I do tend to write with fewer large paragraph rather than more smaller paragraphs, which is something I can work to improve.