Script Discussion: S07E13

Here is the script outline:

 
Ok, as in the past, I'm putting up a scene list here to help me stay on task here and keep folks updated as to when they might want to review for editing purposes:

Act I - Complete
Scene 1 - Complete
Scene 2 - Complete
Scene 3 - Complete
Scene 4 - Complete
Act II - Complete
Scene 5 - Complete
Scene 6 - Complete
Scene 7 - Complete
Scene 8 - Complete
Act III - Complete
Scene 9 - Complete
Scene 10 - Complete
Scene 11 - Complete
Scene 12 - Complete
Act IV - Complete
Scene 13 - Complete
Scene 14 - Complete
Scene 15 - Complete
Scene 16 - Complete
 
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I'm absolutely loving the locations @MithLuin! Scottish Highlands are among the most beautiful places I've ever visited (NZ South Island is probably a bit ahead). I've realised that I've held a negative bias about Hithlum in general, probably coloured by the sense that the Noldor (and then House of Hador) only lived there because a) Thingol said they could, and b) they needed to be in the north to fight the war on Morgoth. And then the Easterlings were essentially forced to live there. I never thought of it as a beautiful place. I stand corrected!
 
Act 1 looks pretty good. I see we have moved up Bór's decision to confront Ulfang's sons to the first act rather than the second act. Also, Maglor's urgent request for a retreat feels quite reasonable. The battle should not seem hopeless before Angband empties at the end of Act 1.
 
I always imagined him getting split in half.
I once did a calculation for just the cleaving of the helmet itself. The limiting factor is actually the body of the wearer which wouldn't provide solid enough resistance. This is why in the script, Fingon is on the ground when the blow comes.
 
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