Season 2 Script Outlines (Approved)

MithLuin

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And so, the moment you've all been waiting for...it's time to write some Scripts!

As of March 10th, the Script Outlines have been submitted to the Exec Team (Corey, Trish, and Dave) and we are able to say with some certainty that the Season 2 Outlines are approved (with comments, but still approved). Corey Olsen finished up the review through Episode 13. This means that they are ready for actual script writing!

This is a collaborative, volunteer project. Anyone who would like to try their hand at writing a script for an episode (or even just individual scenes from an episode) is welcome to do so. We would all be grateful and thrilled if someone were to take on the Frame scenes or the Bad Guy scenes across all of the different episodes. The results can be shared in the forum (please post on the thread for that particular episode, so all discussion is kept together). Please note that if you share your writing publicly on this forum, it will be open to constructive criticism. If you've never shared creative writing before, it can be a soul-crushing experience to have someone point out what they think does not work. SO, gentle reminder to everyone to keep criticism professional and focused on helping the author to improve. If someone who has not been following the podcasts would like to participate, I recommend asking some questions first, to make sure you understand the goals for the episode you are trying to write! If you are not familiar with the formatting used to write a script, or aren't sure exactly what type of language we'd like to use for the elves, don't worry - we can work on that together. This is a work in progress.

Should we be ambitious enough to have completed scripts (after review and editing here), I would like to post them on an external site - we'll work with the folks at the Silmarillion Writers Guild fanfiction site to host completed scripts from this project 🙂. [Details to follow]

The purpose of this thread is to collect all of the final Script Outlines for Season 2 together in one place, as well as to link to the conversations that went into forming them - that way, anyone taking on the project can easily look back at what the Execs asked for in that episode, and what ideas the Script Discussion roundtable came up with to help flesh them out. This is a creative project, so some variation and original ideas are welcome...but sticking to the basic outline should help for cohesion. Also, I recognize that many creative aspects of this project apart from script writing would like to be able to refer to the Script Outlines for details, so having a single thread for Season 2 seemed like a good plan.

The easiest way to announce your intention to work on a script for a particular episode is probably to post a link to a Google Doc in that Episode thread, and then update the file with your progress as you go. If people would like a more formal way of calling 'dibs,' I can keep a list here. While I am not opposed to having multiple people working on a single episode simultaneously, it would probably be a better use of resources to divvy up the episodes among different writers. Here is an example of what Nick is doing with his work-in-progress pilot for the first season: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IfjCQxjX4zYlyvS7fji8Ur7SoOZWA7UScJe0OE3Epws/edit?usp=sharing
 
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Season 2 Episode 1: The Awakening of the Elves

From the Execs (Session Notes and Audio links):
Season 2 Session 5: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/season-2-session-5-episode-1-crisis-in-cuivienen/
Initial Feedback on Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/seaso...-aka-the-silmarillion-needs-more-rap-battles/
Final Review of Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/silmfilm-02-19-script-outlines/

From the Script Discussions: Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4; Part 5; Part 6; Part 7

Brian's longer form Script Outline: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qxo2MWCpK8ovHNNg6O4feo9z1bDwYJq8z8NoTMkKTJE/edit
(Note: the island traffic may be going in different directions in this one, and the Execs did not review it - but it's probably a lot easier to follow for those wanting to write scripts so please do check this document out!)

Messageboard discussion (Script): https://forums.signumuniversity.org...n-2-episode-1-the-awakening-of-the-elves.289/
{Go here to claim the episode or ask questions/share observations about it.}

The attached document is in a format we have not maintained in future outlines. If people like it, we can do more of this. If we *don't* like it, we don't have to do this. Feedback appreciated. The attached file was what was submitted to the Execs prior to their 2nd review session, so do note any of their comments.
 

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Season 2 Episode 2: Starlight

From the Execs (Session Notes and Podcast Audio):
Season 2 Session 6: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/season-2-session-6-episode-2-dont-get-in-the-van-elwe/
Initial Feedback on Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/seaso...-aka-the-silmarillion-needs-more-rap-battles/
Final Review of Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/silmfilm-02-19-script-outlines/

From the Script Discussion Roundtable:
*Initial* Discussion: Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4; Part 5; Part 6;
*Revised* Discussion: Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4; Part 5; Part 6; Part 7
We were asked to rewrite this episode as a more Valar-centric story, and to reorder the timing of Finwë's storyline. So, if you listen to the initial discussion, keep in mind that some things have been changed based on the feedback and followup.

Brian's longer form Script Outline: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_vegWVPwrAVsNqhTye3oSFqNqefdILFP3mZQ-n3q5Xs/edit
Again, this was not actually reviewed by the Execs. But it does include important details, such as the identity of the item that Finwë makes with Aulë and has more storytelling. IIRC, Tatië is missing from the 'Back at Cuiviénen' scenes; Míriel's younger adult sister should be tagging along with her in at least some of her scenes. Also, Elwë's famous grey cloak is a gift from the Valar at the end of this episode.

Messageboard discussion (Script): https://forums.signumuniversity.org...scussion-s02e02-and-other-things-rewrite.358/
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The attached file was what was submitted to the Execs prior to their 2nd review. Please note their comments.
 

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Season 2 Episode 3: The Great Debate

From the Execs (Session Notes and Podcast Audio):
Season 2 Session 7: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/season-2-session-7-episode-3-degreat-debate/
Initial Feedback on Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/seaso...-aka-the-silmarillion-needs-more-rap-battles/
Final Review of Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/silmfilm-02-19-script-outlines/

From the Script Discussion Roundtable:
Discussion - Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 5; Part 6; Part 7

Messageboard discussion (Script): https://forums.signumuniversity.org/index.php?threads/s02e03-the-great-debate.308/
{Go here to claim the episode or ask questions/share observations about it.}

Attached is the version of the Script Outline submitted to the Execs prior to their Final Review. Please note their comments. For instance, they had reservations about the 'why destroy what you can cultivate?' line and wanted to make sure it was clear that Sauron hasn't gone too far down the ruthless dedication to evil path yet. He's still very much trying to do the right thing.
 

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Season 2 Episode 4: Migration Journey

From the Execs (Session Notes and Podcast Audio):
Season 2 Session 8: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/season-2-session-8-episode-4-the-avari-the-unwilling/
Initial Feedback on Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/seaso...-aka-the-silmarillion-needs-more-rap-battles/
Final Review of Episodes 1-4: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/silmfilm-02-19-script-outlines/

From the Script Discussion Roundtable:
Discussion - Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4; Part 5

Messageboard discussion (Script): https://forums.signumuniversity.org...de-4-not-the-trail-of-tears-or-episode-3.316/
{Go here to claim the episode or ask questions/share observations about it.}

Attached is the version of the Script Outline submitted to the Execs prior to their Final Review. Please note their comments.
 

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Season 2 Episode 5: A Touch of Destiny
From the Execs (Session Notes and Podcast Audio):
Season 2 Session 9: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/season-2-session-9-episode-5-the-enemies-and-the-surfer-elves/
With follow-up remarks in Session 10: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/seaso...6-finwe-has-a-lot-of-reproductive-work-to-do/
(Círdan's potential love interest was removed from the story.)
Review of Episodes 5-8: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/silmfilm-02-20-script-outlines-continued/

From the Script Discussion Roundtable:
Discussion - Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4; Part 5

During the Worldbuilding discussion it was suggested that the Valar should be on hand to welcome the Vanyar and Noldor to Valinor, and that we could perhaps see the formation of the Calacirya at that time.

Messageboard discussion (Script): https://forums.signumuniversity.org...sode-5-live-from-midmoot-except-not-live.330/
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Attached is the version of the Script Outline submitted to the Execs prior to their Review. Please note their comments.
 

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Season 2 Episode 6: Elvenhome

From the Execs (Session Notes and Podcast Audio):
Season 2 Session 10: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/seaso...6-finwe-has-a-lot-of-reproductive-work-to-do/
Review of Episodes 5-8: https://silmfilm.mythgard.org/silmfilm-02-20-script-outlines-continued/

From the Script Discussion Roundtable:
Discussion - Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4; Part 5; Part 6; Part 7

Messageboard discussion (Script): https://forums.signumuniversity.org/index.php?threads/season-2-episode-6-elvenhome.338/
{Go here to claim the episode or ask questions/share observations about it.}

Attached is the version of the Script Outline submitted to the Execs prior to their Review. Please note their comments.
 

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