amysrevenge
Well-Known Member
So now that we've discussed the published poem, and the original non-Earendil version of the poem, and the first attempt at Earendilzing the poem, I have this question/comment.
It looks like Tolkien converted the original into this action-packed story-filled poem, with a beginning, a middle, and an end.
And then when he put it in the book, he pulled out all of the action, all of the story. He left in the beginning, and sort of the end, but there's no middle. It's the craziest thing. The first stab at the Earendil poem is pretty much the most we ever learn about his actual adventures. The final version, we don't learn anything at all about his adventures other than that he probably had some, and now he can't go home.
Why this deliberate change?
It looks like Tolkien converted the original into this action-packed story-filled poem, with a beginning, a middle, and an end.
And then when he put it in the book, he pulled out all of the action, all of the story. He left in the beginning, and sort of the end, but there's no middle. It's the craziest thing. The first stab at the Earendil poem is pretty much the most we ever learn about his actual adventures. The final version, we don't learn anything at all about his adventures other than that he probably had some, and now he can't go home.
Why this deliberate change?