Yeah, seeing it on screen is really solidifying that that's the wrong approach for the Timeless halls. Where's the light of Iluvatar? If the Halls are floating in the void, the void's not lot by the light of Iluvatar? That doesn't seem right at all.To be fair, the only example I can think of that involves a single hall being all that exists, just floating in the emptiness of space....is from the ending of the Neverending Story. Fantasia is destroyed by the Nothing, and Atreyu and the Luck Dragon are flying through asteroids until they come upon the last remaining building...which is the castle of the Childlike Empress, the Ivory Tower.
I don't think this is hopelessly hokey (unlike the dialogue, which has some wince-worthy moments), but rather a visually dramatic sequence. Sure, the special effects leave a bit to be desired (early 80s, quite forgivable), but it's not a disaster. But then...I did see this film a zillion times as a child, so I am used to viewing it with an extremely uncritical eye. Maybe I'd be less forgiving if I were seeing it now for the first time.
What do you think a more 'Mythic' design would be for the Timeless Halls and the Void? I mean, you have mentioned looking out the window and seeing a seashore, with the dark water and dark sky stretching as far away as you can go. I'm not opposed to this, really, though the dark water is really problematic, but don't know what you'll see when you look back at the Timeless Halls in this version.
See, this is the thing- why shouldn't the Timeless Halls go on forever? They house a literal omnipotent deity. Why are we fencing such a creature in a single building floating in space?Okay, let me see if I can do a reasonable, non-hokey version of this idea.
So, to start with, we have a 'base' that looks something like this:
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A nebula-like disc, lit from within, perhaps colorful (no stars, of course).
In the center of this, we have a many-roomed structure full of domes, pillars, archways, etc. Not quite as mazy as an M.C. Escher painting, but certainly giving the impression that it goes on (well, not forever). So, when you look through an archway, you see another room, not nothing. It should not feel too closed in, but it is an 'indoor' space that is illuminated as if it were an outdoor space.
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There are some rooms that look 'outside,' but they show this nebula-base structure, so the wall doesn't end on nothingness, but has a brightly-lit shoreline.
Beyond THAT is the Void, which is a blank nothingness, but the edges of the nebula rise up as mist and dissipate into it. We have a boundary, but not a hard boundary.
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When Melkor ventures off into the Void, he looks back and sees the Timeless Halls on their disc-shaped base....from above. So, we never show the unsupported 'floating' Halls. When Iluvatar takes the Ainur 'outside' to look at the vision of Arda in the Void, they are all standing on the nebula-shore, so no one is floating in empty space (well, except for the vision, which is explicitly 'globed in the Void')
Would this be workable?
I think this is a good start.Okay, let me see if I can do a reasonable, non-hokey version of this idea.
So, to start with, we have a 'base' that looks something like this:
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A nebula-like disc, lit from within, perhaps colorful (no stars, of course).
In the center of this, we have a many-roomed structure full of domes, pillars, archways, etc. Not quite as mazy as an M.C. Escher painting, but certainly giving the impression that it goes on (well, not forever). So, when you look through an archway, you see another room, not nothing. It should not feel too closed in, but it is an 'indoor' space that is illuminated as if it were an outdoor space.
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There are some rooms that look 'outside,' but they show this nebula-base structure, so the wall doesn't end on nothingness, but has a brightly-lit shoreline.
Beyond THAT is the Void, which is a blank nothingness, but the edges of the nebula rise up as mist and dissipate into it. We have a boundary, but not a hard boundary.
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When Melkor ventures off into the Void, he looks back and sees the Timeless Halls on their disc-shaped base....from above. So, we never show the unsupported 'floating' Halls. When Iluvatar takes the Ainur 'outside' to look at the vision of Arda in the Void, they are all standing on the nebula-shore, so no one is floating in empty space (well, except for the vision, which is explicitly 'globed in the Void')
Would this be workable?
I agree, no trees. No earthly nature.And I prefer fractals to trees. I don't want the place to look like it could have been built on earth.
I love this idea, that would be great.Do we want the Timeless Halls to be endless, though? I'm not suggesting it should be a single concert hall in size - I'd much prefer a many rooms approach. But....a city, not a galaxy. It's all a matter of perspective and there's no frame of reference, though - that nebula is, of course, huge. So, if the Halls seem tiny perched on it, I guess....
And I prefer fractals to trees. I don't want the place to look like it could have been built on earth.
You can't say that Tolkien's word choice suggests one interpretation and then turn around and say "just because the Ainur couldn't pereive darkness doesn't mean it wasn't there", Nick, that's border-line doublethink. Also presence of light does not preclude the perception of darkness, even on the sunniest, brightest day.Here's the problem.
I have no difficulty accepting that the Timeless Halls are infinite. Nor do I have difficulty accepting that the Void is an equally infinite space that either surrounds or borders them. Now the Ainulindale does state that the sound from the Music goes "out into" the Void, suggesting that it is outside, but you don't have to take that as encompassing.
However, we're tasked with illustrating this physical paradox on screen. Since the border must be shown, they cannot be infinite on the screen, and the Timeless Halls cannot surround the Void, as Tolkien seems to not have had that in mind based on his word choices.
As to the issue of the darkness of the Void. It does say that the Ainur had not perceived the Darkness until Eru took away the Vision, but that doesn't mean it wasn't there. In fact, before the Vision, they were unable to see at all, so without the light of the Vision, it makes sense that the Void would be dark.
And no, Iluvatar's light does not necessarily illuminate the Void, since that moment when the Ainur first perceive Darkness, he's standing right there with them. Until Ea is created, there is no light in the Void.
The short answer? No one in Middle Earth has ever invented a rocket that can transverse the Void, so the Timeless Halls are separated from Arda by an impassable chasm of emptiness (and death). I don't think we need any more than that. Tolkien has translated Arda as 'our Solar System', and we've never managed to send someone anywhere near that far away from Earth at the present time. So....is this *really* an issue?If we represent them as halls floating in a void, like in the clip from NES, it feels to me an awful lot like we're grounding our metaphors too much in the physical world. Like you said, if the void is outer space and the halls are in the void, then what, other than a "bending of the ways" as in Middle Earth, prevents one from taking a rocket to get there?
Make the Halls an entire country. Rock, soil, sand, water, trees, all of it. Make the void an ocean on its shores. The shore is a metaphor for a dividing between the two. We can emphasize the alien nature...
Briefly, with regard to the bolder point, it's because you're not thinking metaphorically. in my version, the ground is not ground, and the waves are not waves, and the shore is not an actual shore. They're visual metaphors. What I'm getting from you guys is "this is the shape of the universe as is, or as close as we can depict it visually", and I'm saying, side step that all together by giving up trying to depict it as is and just using a visual metaphor. If that's our disconnect and none of you is saying that at all, then I apologize profusely for the confusion and collateral hubbub.Okay, I know I am clearly getting frustrated trying to work this out, so I'm pretty much about ready to wash my hands of it and just be like, 'yeah, looks great' to whatever someone sketches up for this.
The Halls of Ilúvatar should be brightly lit and have colors, or be at the very least dimly lit so the Ainur themselves can stand out being all glowy. But there is definitely light there, and the structures should be well-defined (ie, solid).
The Void should be dark, empty, and rather undefined. So, it could be blank space, it could be dark waves, or it could be darkness with whispy smoke to give it an intangible feel. But the darkness of the Void should be in clear contrast to the light of the Timeless Halls.
Remember that no one but Melkor is giving any thought for the emptiness of the Void, so the other Ainur likely have not bothered to look at it prior to Ilúvatar taking them all outside the Halls to see the Vision. And while they are looking at the Vision (which is bright), they are thinking about that and not really thinking about the negative space around it.
Then, the Vision goes out - and it's like if you are looking at something bright and then look away and realize, oh, hey, yeah....it's dark here. In part, your eyes are dazzled by the light, so it seems a lot darker than it really is and you stumble around for a few moments until your eyes adjust. I am not suggesting that the Ainur have that rods/cones issue going on in their pre-embodied eyes. But in greater part, what they are really perceiving is the absence of the Vision...it was here, and now it's not, and what is left behind is a hole, an empty space, and....and it's everywhere, because the Void is in fact empty.
My interpretation of Tolkien's line is that the Void was always dark, but this is forcefully brought to the attention of the Ainur when they are mourning the absence of the beautiful vision they just saw....so that they perceive Darkness for the first time.
Regardless, though, I really can't think how we would pull off a brightly lit Void. 'The Neverending Story' does that, but you'll note their Void is full of things - there's stars, and they're flying through pieces of destroyed planet that are everywhere. They don't go full-on blank darkness with nothing in it (except the boundaries of your sound stage) until the 'in the beginning, it is always dark' line. When you have a blank space with nothing in it, making it brightly lit is a little weird.
When I speak of Melkor being out in the darkness and looking back on the brightly lit Halls (or later, Arda), what I am really thinking of is this:
http://wormtalk.blogspot.com/2008/10/my-trip-to-shire-this-past-weekend-i.html
In Professor Drout's account of 'The Long-expected Party' in 2008, he describes leaving the party (lit by paper lanterns) and walking some distance away into the darkness and looking back. What he is looking at becomes even more precious with distance, and shows that no matter what, the darkness is always there, waiting. We want Melkor to feel *alone* in these moments, and I think we can do that very poignantly if he can see ALL of the Halls or ALL of Arda laid out before him, and he is not a part of that brightness and joy.
The short answer? No one in Middle Earth has ever invented a rocket that can transverse the Void, so the Timeless Halls are separated from Arda by an impassable chasm of emptiness (and death). I don't think we need any more than that. Tolkien has translated Arda as 'our Solar System', and we've never managed to send someone anywhere near that far away from Earth at the present time. So....is this *really* an issue?
I also am utterly confused how, on one hand, you can say we're 'grounding our metaphors too much in the physical world' and then offer as the solution to that 'an entire country - rock, soil, sand, water, trees, all of it'. How is that *less* stuck on the rules of the physical world than Halls impossibly floating in emptiness? It's not that I even object to this idea, I just really don't understand what this is or how it works at all. I thought I was addressing this by constructing the Halls on the nebula-base, with the nebula forming a sort of buffer zone between the edge of the Halls and the edge of the Void - it's a strand or shore stretching out from the walls of whatever the Halls structure is to reach the Void, and it's large enough that the whole company of the Ainur and Ilúvatar can stand on it without venturing into the Void itself. Likewise, if the Timeless Halls are truly infinite, then they stretch in all directions, forever, and have no boundaries at all. So, Arda and the Void would have to be inside the Timeless Halls, which makes no sense at all. It's very clear you have to leave the Timeless Halls to get to the Void and to Arda, and that both of those places are somewhere separate from the Timeless Halls. So...we need boundaries, and it can't be infinite.
I can't think of a single reason why an immortal deity needs an infinite abode. He can be omnipresent, of course....but even in that case, he does not need a house that encompasses all of Creation.
Can you describe what you expect the Halls and Void to look like? Because I'm just confused right now.