I'll be honest, this is up there in my opinion as one of the top five strongest episodes we've done, and I have a feeling that it may be due to how comparatively little of the text we are covering here. The events that take place in the book are a single paragraph, only about four sentences. This is one of the reasons why I have pushed for us to take our time and not try to gobble up too much of the story too quickly.This is very good.
I like how Scene 8 looks. That's a good way for him to go.
So much is there in scene 14+16 that touches many of the main stories.