I’m really glad you like the scripts!Btw as i continue to read the script...
I can't say how much i love the way the captains and wives are introduced! It is so good to have new interesting characters!
and i like the funny mocking on flying balrogs and a not dead elf with a strangely twisted name
I like the feanorians brooding and boasting, the strategy, The Finarfinians excourse of etymologies ... really good!
One thing i did not like however... i felt that rhogrins capture is a bit unheroic and sad... maybe the part in which he fights could be omitted and we just see him heavily wounded crawling out of the remains of some battle or ambush to see the undefined shape of some terrible enemy , then again cut outbwhat happens and we see him as a prisoner? Something like this maybe? I don't know...
In an episode focused primarily on a major battle, Rhogrin’s fight against whatever ambushed him would probably seem less heroic than if it took place in a less action-packed episode, so I think it’s better to leave that mysterious. I could, however, mention that he is badly wounded from the fight when he wakes up in Angband.