That’s some impressive work, that outline! Speaking from experience, having written an outline for last season in order to convince the execs of a better way to do season 3, I think I’m not wrong if I say that the level of detail is perhaps a bit too high, or somewhat premature. On a general level, I like the outline, but there are a lot of smaller details that we could deal with during episode processing, or we’d get stuck right now discussing them and thereby blocking the whole outline. I mean, we don’t have to decide now exactly what Maedhros says to his brothers when he returns with Fingon, who joins Angrod to Doriath, when Norn dies, and so on. Again, I don’t necessarily disagree with your ideas. On the contrary, I like most of them. But if you are aiming to use this to change Corey’s mind, my advice would be to cut it down to a third of what you have right now. This outline is of course still valuable in the coming work, though.